Godawful poetry in Jab Tak Hai Jaan
Was tempted so much to check the film out fir the sake of Rahman’s music.
But how can I venture to go into a theater, if that godawful poetry remains in the film.? Aditya might be a cynical egotist, but how could Yashji allow anyone to make a travesty of his wonderful . ” Main aur Meri Tanhai’?
Forget the bad imagery, even the lines are in metre and a wrong word is used just for the sake of rhyming , just because Aditya’s vocabulary is limited to perhaps jujst 100 words or so.
” ..nahin bhoolounga mein and …nahin maf karoongan mein”
And what is ‘ tera haath se mera hath chodna’? Shouldn’t it be ‘ chhutna’?
Juts because Aditya cant find another word to rhyme with ‘ modna”?